"The Missing Piece"- Poem

[Jess]

Here is a poem Scotty and me wrote in about 30 minutes. Tell us what u think please!

"The Missing Piece"
I was yet a child,
In a man's world fighting to do what I needed to do
Yet there was something missing in my life that I wanted to find.
There was a hole unfilled,
A missing puzzle piece.
I need to find this to be whole,
To feel like my life is completed.

As I grew up something I noticed,
I got looks from classier people than me.
Like I was nothing,
But dirt to them,
And yet they didn't look happy themselves.

Time passed as I looked at things,
And at people that was stuck,
Stuck at a dead end jobs.
Then I realized what was missing was my dreams,
My dreams coming true.

Dreams of have a job I love,
Having a loving family,
A wife I love to death,
Having as many children as she wants,
Living in a Southern Victorian house,
With a wraparound porch,
And a white picket fences in the background,
With our dogs,
And other animals we might want.
These are my dreams,
This is what I want,
And no one can take this from me now.

[Aurelia]

 

*applause*

[Angel~]

 

[verdandi]

 

[Jess]

thanks